Odd mix of Harry Potter and Percy Jackson.
Imagine if only the last book of HP was ever published and every page had a reference to the previous books that do not exist save in the author's mind.
You could have done more, your idea was clever but this is mostly derivative. I liked the potential here but you did not use it fully. This could have been super excellent as a series.
Baz reminds me of Draco Malfoy. This is reading like fan fiction the more pages I turn. Good, fun time pass.
SPOILER I knew it. I knew it. Slash, boys love, surprise. It felt like a Drarry fan fiction from the very start. The hero was more obsessed over his arch enemy than over his girl or over his female best friend. The ending is different and inspired.
Imagine if only the last book of HP was ever published and every page had a reference to the previous books that do not exist save in the author's mind.
You could have done more, your idea was clever but this is mostly derivative. I liked the potential here but you did not use it fully. This could have been super excellent as a series.
Baz reminds me of Draco Malfoy. This is reading like fan fiction the more pages I turn. Good, fun time pass.
SPOILER I knew it. I knew it. Slash, boys love, surprise. It felt like a Drarry fan fiction from the very start. The hero was more obsessed over his arch enemy than over his girl or over his female best friend. The ending is different and inspired.
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